TPO 54 Writing Independent Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support you

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TPO 54 Writing Independent

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Since beginning of the time, human beings have always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day life.

Throughout history, art has played a pivotal role in all countries and societies. it is obvious that sport is very important and athletes are the champions and pride of a country but art, on the other hand, art is a history of a nation and we should value this important. artists are the voice of their country and they are the leader of the oppressed. so, I believe that without any shadow of doubt sport is important but we should be honest with ourselves that the art not only is important but also is necessary.

If government invests more money on art the artists have more chance and space to take a risk and any art will flourish at risk. And also I believe art improvement has a direct impact on society and the member of society. people In the country where the government cares about art are happier and more satisfied than people in other countries. art improvement is the prerequisite of culture improvement and any society needs to enrich their culture. art is a very important part of heart native life of any country. dance, for example, every native people have the specific movement that today we called them dance and these movements are the exact reflections of their culture.

The second reason I would like to bring here is with a glace it is notable that art is an expensive career. money always is one of the most important concerns of artists. money for materials like colors, pens and pencils and the other necessary things that any artist needed. so, I believe already more governments have invested in the sport and have ignored the art for decades. And in this modern life, we should care about art and culture.

To wrap it up and make a long story short, in my opinion, the government should more cars about art and artists because art is an inseparable part of culture and culture is a country identity and I believe we should pay more attention to our identity.

In a nutshell, the art is important and also controversial but we should try to keep it alive.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69473684211 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51516728708 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468421052632 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9956273729 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146126382111 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050681858515 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032320610032 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079743864809 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338656253493 0.0645574589148 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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