How do movies or television influence people’s behavior?
Since the beginning of the time, human beings have always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convince to day-to-day lives.
throughout history, society has played a prominent role in all families, especially in kid’s educations.
In the modern society that we live everything changed. With technology progress, there was a big gap between now from even 20 years ago.
now everyone has at least one cell phone in their bag or pocket. one of the most kid’s favorite toys is Ipod and we even can’t find one house without television.
First and foremost, according to the above sentences, it can be concluded that all of us kind of addicted to technology. it’s been a long time that one question confused all psychiatrists and sociologists the question is: do the movies influence society or society control the cinemas.
there are many sociologists’ claims that throughout history human behaviors showed that human beings reaction, ethics, and behaviors are like a mirror and they have direct impacts on each other. For make it understandable I will make a hypothesis, imagine in we live in 10 member society, all-male and aggressive.
they want a suitable entertainment for them; on the other hand, they need something that they can understand. So in this hypothetical society if the members want to see a movie they are a fan of action mystery or aliens movies.
Thus, most of the sociologist believes that the people behaviors and requests effected on movies.
On the otherwise, the psychiatrists believe that the neuron of the human brain works very differently. they believe the human brain works like a rollercoaster; they are fast and move in a pattern. if something changes the pattern the brains neurons lost their way and they will be lost and confused. they can’t work automatically and they need to follow the pattern. The psychiatric believe human’s brain is very sensitive and active; everything has a direct effect on brains work. they believe that if society or someone wants, they can do an influence on humans.
I personally confirmed psychiatrists opinions because throughout history we have seen many changes in human behaviors by advertising or cultural changes. The movies and TV series are one of the human’s favorite entertainments. every house has a television and every television has at least 100 channel and all of them show movies. it is undeniable that such a huge system has an effect on human’s basins as well as aspirin.
To wrap it up, every single thing that we work and see more than once in a day. they will be part of our lives. now imagine how television and movies are controlled us?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, well, at least, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15280898876 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96035838241 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507865168539 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8758543184 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1923076923 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1153846154 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88461538462 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214721452973 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552412261493 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666408996206 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781487926472 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540741593417 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.