Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The issue that the children from the age 2-5 should be kept away from television advertisements is really a complex one. Nowadays children spend most of their time watching television during which they see a lot of advertisements. These advertisements can have adverse effects on children’s behavior which I will elaborate in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, most of the advertisements shown on the television nowadays are related to the console games which mostly targets the age group of 2-5. Due to this reason, children repeatedly insist their parents to buy games for them whereas they should have been invested their time in doing something productive. Playing console games all the time in a very early age makes them addictive of them. Consequently, the children will become stubborn if they don’t get what the television advertisements hammer their mind all the time. According to the recent research conducted by the Neilson Limited, television advertisements related to video games targeting age 2-5 have resulted 20% increase in the number of children being admitted to the rehabilitation center this year. This shows my inclination why the children from the age group 2-5 shouldn’t be exposed to television advertisements.
Secondly television advertisements these days have resulted in making children more materialistic. For instance, television advertisements of electronic gadgets by many companies has created a lot of problems for the parents. This is due to the reason, the children watching the advertisements believe that the thing he sees on the ads are more perfect than the ones he hasn’t seen on the television. Their continuous involvement in these type of activities at an early stage compromises their learning stage where they could have been taught something related to brain building. This elucidates my concrete stand against the television ads shown to young children.
What is half full to some people can be considered as half empty by other people. There are some certain advertisements shown on the television regarding the summer camps which inspire children to get involved in healthy activities. For instance, during summers thousands of summer camp ads are run on the television showing children playing and learning new and productive things.
As far I am concerned, my point of view is that there should be a central authority which should monitor which types of ads should be shown to the 2-5 age group children and which ones should not be, so that we can save our young generation from getting spoiled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35207823961 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07887360905 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493887530562 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4373083429 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.611111111 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215777868801 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786794455454 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423713070475 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134203769824 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306032796784 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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