Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past, more extended family was than nuclear family. Some people thinks that extended family is less important Now that it was in the past. Others disagree. In my view, extended family is important in today because of two most important reasons.
First, people in the extended family becomes more mature in social atmosphere. People's understanding sense build better. He or she can behave in proper way in social circumstances. For example, I born and brought up in extended family where I lived with my grandparents, I often participate and organize our family event in teenage. In the marriage ceremony of my elder cousins, I organize the whole program. I send invitation to many people as well as our relatives. Many people comes in my cousins Marriage and I handled effective all of the people. This is just one of my family program in where I played a crucial role. So, this kind of practices helped me to more wise and mature to take decision at any difficult situation comes to my later Life.As you see this experience to live with extended family harness my maturity.
Second, sharing mind developed when people live in extended family. For instances, In my childhood, we often share our works, food among our all cousins. When we take our meals everyday, we often seat together in dining table. My grandparents, uncles often share their food with me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...in social circumstances. For example, I born and brought up in extended family where...
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Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ousins Marriage and I handled effective all of the people. This is just one of my family p...
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Line 2, column 752, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ficult situation comes to my later Life.As you see this experience to live with ex...
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Line 2, column 752, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ficult situation comes to my later Life.As you see this experience to live with ex...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...our all cousins. When we take our meals everyday, we often seat together in dining table...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65152946764 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9699020254 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.875 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190264495974 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677240880414 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823998207759 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152548508632 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101867920341 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.