Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
It is considered by some people that nowadays the large family plays less essential role as it was in the prior period. I am absolutely disagree with this opinion because, in my opinion, the importance of the family for me will never change.
First of all, you can find support, love and fondness in the extended family and, even though mother or father members do not have enough time to help you, it is possible to appeal to, for example, grandparents. For instance, In my big family I always can be sure that, if I have a problem, somebody will help me, give me useful advises and warm my soul in hard times.
Secondly, having a large family is better as you can have more possibilities to find an accommodation outside your own home, for example, if you want to enroll the university in another city. To prove my point of view I would like to remember my applying to the university in Moscow, Russia. It was my dream to study in that city and my aunt who lives in Moscow gave me a chance to materialize it, as she allowed me to live in her house near the university.
Finally, if you have the extended family, you also have more parties where you can your time with all family members together and have fun such as dancing or singing. For example, I have a tradition in my family. Every New Year we spend this holiday together. We cook a lot of dishes, make beautiful presents for each other and during all evening and night make many photos which I like to revise when I have spare time. These memories give me energy not give up and warm my soul.
To sum up, the family is very essential part of my life and I can not imagine my life without my family's members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...as in the prior period. I am absolutely disagree with this opinion because, in my opinio...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l never change. First of all, you can find support, love and fondness in the e...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...condly, having a large family is better as you can have more possibilities to find...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...you can have more possibilities to find an accommodation outside your own home, for example, if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37380191693 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38719085847 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575079872204 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0391295653 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14041978133 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515007319392 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547352441336 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894311129023 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436887219682 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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