Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
When it comes to the issue of the extended family importance now is greater than it was before, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reason for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinion. Also, those opponents can provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the extended family importance is greater than it was before because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that now we need our extended family very much. Because the life develop very rapidly now. So, we need to get an experience from the people whom live around us. Extended family’s younger person’s advice consist of both knowledge and experience. Also, his advice contain a lot of care that may help us a lot.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of the extended family importance now. Most of the parent work for long hours during a day. Extended family can help those parents in their children breeding. If the child spend most of the time out of the home, his parents can not know a lot of things which related to him. While if the children spend the time with them grandfather or grandmother that make the parent more comfort about their children.
Finally it is a well-established facts that if the children grow up among a big family’s members they will learn how to take care on their parents in the future.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people’s opinions are over whelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m live around us. Extended family's younger person's advice consist of ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...t more comfort about their children. Finally it is a well-established facts that if ...
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Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'fact'?
Suggestion: fact
...en. Finally it is a well-established facts that if the children grow up among a bi...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219444444444 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.144444444444 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.075 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0472222222222 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0777777777778 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119444444444 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0222222222222 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5286928984 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194444444444 0.0309702414327 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00277777777778 0.00188951952338 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.0887237588012 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0277777777778 0.0209618222197 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0305555555556 0.0139019557991 220% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1826.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 316.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77848101266 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300632911392 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227848101266 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145569620253 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0822784810127 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5286928984 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 62.2841672669 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 19.75 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7333022483 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.5533526081 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 42.5348101266 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.34020618557 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379609762577 0.300154397459 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0985000597003 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597253502609 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529448804344 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.213655219526 0.151897553556 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144798285863 0.114077575197 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902512569876 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.218829600898 0.336927656856 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0601218428781 0.067059652881 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213093880572 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970123773199 0.0618886996521 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.