Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
TPO-36-2
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that a strong education system plays an important role in the development of a country. Some people claims that spending money on the education of children is more important than university for a development. While it seems that governments should take university into consideration and give priority to them for a couple of reasons which will be describe in the following.
Firstly, if government assign considerable budget to the universities, they can conduct new researches and projects, because they would have sufficient resources for their researches which can result in science production. These new productions in the science would be a National treasure for a country which can export to other countries for earning thousand billion of money. A telling example is in the Germany where a new drug for treating the lung cancer are fined after that exported to different parts of the world and earn money.
Secondly, if a government spend money on the university and then provides appropriate infrastructure for academic works, ingenious people from different parts of the world can be absorbed. As a result, we have enough human resources to interact with the industry positively and perform new projects. Furthermore, this government do not need to outsourcing new projects for example in the field of oil discovery to forging companies. Another example is related to U.S.A where by spending money on the university the geniuses of the world were attracted to universities, and America has become superpower in the world.
Admittedly, spending money on children education has numerous benefits such as talent discovery or personality growth, nevertheless, if a society do not have Proper infrastructure for conducing new researches, this society cannot develop and Human resources are wasted.
To conclude, for mentioned reasons, I believe that spending money to university is more important than children education.
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- TPO-40 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- TOEFL T P O 40 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39344262295 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05486865852 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9384940345 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.083333333 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749559710847 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340882653773 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034930395454 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556309940608 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273578574582 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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