Do you agree or disagree? It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older
Although many prefer to travel abroad when they are young, I, on the other hand, prefer to visit different countries when I get older. I will address the most discernible reasons why I feel this way in the following.
To begin with, life is challenging these days and impose many unexpected events to us. Because traveling abroad cost a lot of money it is better to save money when we are young in order to be able to deal with hard situation. For instance, Last year my friends suggested me to visit foreign country in our new year holly day. I refused to go with them, becasue I wanted to save money to buy a car. Several months after my friends abroad travel one of them diagnosed with hard disease. However, he had health insurance, but they did not cover all of his hospital cost. Therefore, he forced to got a loan to continued his treatment. When I talked to him, he said I should not went that trip and I should save my money for this enxpected event. This example illustrate that young people must save their money instead of waste that for abroad travel.
Moreover, visiting different countries need a lot of time, but young people do not have a lot of days of thus it is better for to visit foreign countries when they get retired. My own experience is a good example of this. My father visited a lot of countries when he way young. But after his retirement he regret that, becasue he did not save a lot of money for his retirements days and also he did not visited that countries properly. He visited China two years after his retirement, and he said becasue I had a lot of time I enjoy my trip and did not worry about my time.
Not only that but also becasue young people have young childern they could not enjoy their trip well. For instance, I recal that when I went to abroad travel whit my parents I always wanted to go to cinema but my parents wanted to go to musum or other fame place therefore ruined my parents trip.
In conclusion, it. is for all the aforementioned reasons, I firmly believe it is better to travel abroad when we are older. This is because they must save money for unxpected events, and because they have limited days of, and because of their little children they cannot enjoy their trip.
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- Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past 73
- T P O 52 3
- Some high school teachers (teachers of students ages 14-18) spend most of class time lecturing (speaking) while the students listen and take notes. Other high school teachers spend most of class time on discussion and projects that students are highly inv 60
- Writing task one TPO 3
- TPO 53 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd impose many unexpected events to us. Because traveling abroad cost a lot of money it...
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Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'go', 'wend'
Suggestion: go; wend
...n I talked to him, he said I should not went that trip and I should save my money fo...
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Line 3, column 756, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
... for this enxpected event. This example illustrate that young people must save their money...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'regrets'.
Suggestion: regrets
... way young. But after his retirement he regret that, becasue he did not save a lot of ...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'visit'
Suggestion: visit
...is retirements days and also he did not visited that countries properly. He visited Chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42372881356 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34741985242 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450363196126 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0788306408 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172592883579 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618066393215 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807936525516 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11769203573 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545387148299 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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