do you agree or disagree?
The most important problems in the world will be solved in our lifetime.
Today’s world is facing some major problems thet need to be solved to guarantee our lives as human beings on the Earth. In this regard, many might opine that concerning the rate at which human beings is making prograss indicates that we will soon find solution for every given problems. I personal subscribe to the issue that the major problems will not be solved during our lifetime. I cling to this standpoint for two main reasons, which I will elucidate in the following essay.
To begin with, in today’s world, we are facing an increasingly growth in the world’s population, which has significant consequences that determine our future as human beings on the Earth. Overpopulation as a major concern would lead to shortages of food, place to live, energy resources, to name but a handful. In order to attack such upcoming challenges, human kinds need to find an alternative place other than Earth to live and subsistent. While, it has been over a century of outter space exploration that has led to landing on moon and landing exploring robots on the moons of some planets, finding an appropriate host which supports human beings’ life will definitely takes longer that it has expected. Thus, although all the efforts that are being made today will culminate in remarkable results, the very day will not be in our lifetime.
Second, in the modern era, despite all the progress that human beings has made over seven thousands years of civilization, there are still many complicated conflicts among nations. What would come as a shock, the victims of wars are notabley far more that the victims of natural disasters or some environmental issues. The true story is, the political policies that superpowers take in order to take advantage of developing countries have left more miserable people than any thing else on the Earth. While 7000 years of civilization could not bring human beings to the acceptable level of humanity, how can we expect all this problems would be solved during our lifetime.
To put all in a nutshell, considering all the aforementioned points and examples, I firmly believe that the most dominant problems of human beings will not be solved during our lifetime. I believe so because discovering other planets to live in order to find a solution for exploding population is a time-consuming process, and also becsuse the wars among human beings of different parts of the world would not be ended because they nourishes political policiies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: much might; a good deal of might
...an beings on the Earth. In this regard, many might opine that concerning the rate at which...
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Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rograss indicates that we will soon find solution for every given problems. I per...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...h, in today's world, we are facing an increasingly growth in the world's population, which h...
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Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...human beings' life will definitely takes longer that it has expected. Thus, alth...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...es have left more miserable people than any thing else on the Earth. While 7000 years of ...
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Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...evel of humanity, how can we expect all this problems would be solved during our lif...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'nourish'
Suggestion: nourish
...e world would not be ended because they nourishes political policiies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03147699758 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79957600876 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532687651332 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3664014421 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.533333333 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5333333333 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284029115311 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112276288742 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112862633072 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195618134983 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647590776322 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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