Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problems affecting our society today will be solved in our lifetime.
Society’s problems occur every day, but science develops and technology updates day after day, and to be optimistic, some problems affecting our society today can be solved in our lifetime. However, I, in reality, do not think the most important problems can be fixed in our lifetime. Such as environmental problems and health problems.
Recent decades, environmental problems have raised attention throughout the globe. For example, the global temperature is increasing slightly, called global warming, which will make the glaciers melt. With the glaciers melting, the sea level will go up, and this will cause that some coastal cities, such as Shang Hai and New York, will be flooded, which is harmful to environment and humans. Scientists and experts declare it is caused by greenhouse effect, which means we give off too much carbon dioxide to the atmosphere. Therefore, countries reach agreement to limit the emission of the greenhouse gas and encourage people to do something eco-friendly, such as taking public transportation and using recyclable materials. However, these methods cannot prevent the temperature from increasing, which keeps rising at a slow speed.
Health issues connect with everyone. It has been several centuries since we fought with diseases. Some sickness becomes extinct because medical scientists conquer them, but some diseases have never been conquered. For example, when it comes to HIV, almost people are scared of it, because even now there is no approach to treating it. Experts have continued to study AIDS which destroys human immune system since it appeared. However, the disease spreads all over the world and millions of people are infected. Once being infected, the sick will become weaker and weaker day after day until they die. What people can do is just to wait for medical scientists to work out useful ways to treat the disease.
In conclusion, in my opinion, some problems can be settled gradually in our lifetime, but the most significant issues affecting our society today will not be fixed in our lifetime and humans and those issues will co-exist in the space.
- Some people think that secondary school students should study international news as a school subject but others argue that it would be a waste of valuable school time Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Millions of tourists visit places of natural beauty mountains lakes and beaches every year However they sometimes leave rubbish behind in these places Why has this happened What can be done to solve the problem 61
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important problems affecting our society today will be solved in our lifetime 76
- Some people say governments should give priority to health care while others believe that taxpayers money should be spent on other important priorities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Young people should leave their homes from rural areas to work in cities To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25882352941 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66342002478 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1436441504 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31110785468 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077844981643 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114075900352 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220638784891 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153813242035 0.0645574589148 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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