Do you agree or disagree with the statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study in.
People often process different perspectives about whether all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study in or not. Based on my personal experience and observation of life. I strongly disagree with the statement.
First of all, students are usually busy, and they have no time to take history courses especially if they are not major in the history. For example, I majored in computer science in the college. In fact, I was extremely busy in studying the classes of my majority every day. Moreover, I had to do the part-time job and joined some extracurricular activities every week. As a result, I did not have any free time to take the history classes.
Secondly, students care about their career, but taking history classes can not help students find the jobs. For instance, most of the jobs require employees to have practical skills, such as accounting, coding, or designing. However, students can not learn practical skills in the history classes. Actually, all they learn are historical theories or knowledge. That is to say, what students learn in the history classes can not make it easier for students to find the jobs.
Last but not least, students are concerned about money, and taking history courses takes students more money. For example, students have to pay credit fee for taking courses. In others words, the more courses they take, the more money they should pay. To be more specific, taking one more class will take students about 1000 US dollars per semester. On the other hands, if students do not have to take the history classes. They can save more money and control their budget as estimated.
In conclusion, I severely maintain that all university students should not be required to take history courses. After all, students are busy, care about their career and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0064516129 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52674353317 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.132436324 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9047619048 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7619047619 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426171405133 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130268475283 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118863645588 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271196278113 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126969994944 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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