Relationships are very important in life, many times friends are treated as next to the family. In other words, good friends act as family. As it is common saying that human being is a social animal it clearly implies that we cannot survive without getting social with our friends and family. The statement mentioned above is a hot topic of debate nowadays among scholars. I personally believe that it is better to keep the old friends. There are certain reasons to it which I am going to explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, the understanding you share with the old frineds cannot be replaced by the new ones. You like to spent time with the people with whom you feels comfortable, this comes when you have good understanding with the people. The old friend can judge by the tone of the voice whether you are happy or not. It is very important to have some old frineds in life who can give best advice in the difficult situations because they know about us inside out. They are with us in our worst as well as best conditions. Thus, old friends can never be replaced by the new friends.
Besides this, we can trust our old friends blindly. The trust is an important factor to strengthen any relationship. We can share anything with our old buddies which is not possible with the new ones. The old friends do not judge us because they us very well. I would like share an example on this from my personal experience. Once I tried ciggerate just for fun and I shared this incident with my old friend but she does not judged me or does not pointed out finger on my character because she knows me very well and trusts me that I am not a bad person and will not do anything wrong. This type of trust you can not develop with the new frineds as it takes time to develop trustworthy relationship.
Last but not the least, the care taken by an old friend is irreplaceable. The old friends sometimes acts as mother and other time like father and that is why they are our second family. My old friend helped me in the project report in the university as her writing skills are very good and effective though she has to complete her own project too. This is the bonding and feeling od care we share with the old friends.
In a nutshell, it can be said that old friends are very important in life as we have understanding, trust and a great bonding with them. It can be said that old friends are like barrels of wine the older they are the sweeter they get.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...pent time with the people with whom you feels comfortable, this comes when you have g...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
...o have some old frineds in life who can give best advice in the difficult situations beca...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'judge'
Suggestion: judge
...ent with my old friend but she does not judged me or does not pointed out finger on my...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'point'
Suggestion: point
... but she does not judged me or does not pointed out finger on my character because she ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, thus, well, as to, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41356673961 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39323894809 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44420131291 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5039525202 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.68 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256530903467 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825449825865 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420891738764 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153057172289 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427852012746 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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