Do you agree or disagree with the statement? People will spend less time cooking and preparing food in twenty years.
Eating food and staying in a shape are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact, we live in a chaotic and uncertain world, we have to pay more attention to the nutrients and foods that we consume every day. A controversial question that is often raised regarded to this issue is whether people pay less time cooking and preparing food, or whether they are aware and spend more time on what they eat. Some people possess the conviction that the former have more likely to happen whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is satisfied. I am personally content that this issue is multifaceted. I agree with this statement. Since people are in hurry, they prefer to have something quickly, so they don’t feel willing to spend more time preparing their food. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is that we all know that some specific events and deadlines gain our total concentration and focus rather than any activity. As prices rose dramatically, it is hard for people to afford their lives. Thus they begin to work more than a shift and have several part-time jobs or freelance projects besides their main job. In this situation, there is no more time to consume a portion of healthy food. Although having healthy meals are important for our body's health, some people prefer to eat fast food and junk food because they are easy to make and are more delicate.
The second rationale reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that cooking is a talent. Some people fail to learn it but at the same time, some people are able to cook mouth-watering cuisine. The first group prefers to don’t waste more material in learning especially if they cook poisoned food that brings them a toll. Consider my personal experience to make this point more clear. I was a harmful in mading food. I only could prepare simple food for example boiled eggs. One day I decided to make pasta. It was awful. All my mac and cheese were many and I used a lot of cream in it. No one could not eat that. So I had to drop it into the trash bin .
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I Agree with this statement that people pay less time on their meals.
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- TPO 50 integrated writing
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
...g reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is that we all know that ...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... hard for people to afford their lives. Thus they begin to work more than a shift an...
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Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.... So I had to drop it into the trash bin . In brief, due to the aforementioned re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, thus, whereas, for example, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62200956938 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46755191142 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543062200957 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3151205786 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.28 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.72 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251631670721 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673563651585 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812128924203 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178162452552 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695291391526 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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