do you agree or disagree?it is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than by doing exercise.
The question is it is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than by doing exercise or not. Everyone with regard to his private vantage point can maintain a specific direction toward this idea, however I am wailing to refute it, by the way there are milliard people who live in the world with diverse habits. My arguments and reasons are listed below which will strengthen my point of view toward exercise:
To begin with, it is axiomatic that the role of exercise in our life is undeniable. Besides all of medical advantages of physical activity, it can modify other life's aspects as removing stress, destroying anxiety, increasing self- confidence and creating excitement and list goes on. After a tedious work day that you have been under pressure, nothing will be able to provide peace for you except exercise. Based on the done researches in Harvard University in 1999, doing sport at least twenty minutes in day will help us to secrete Adrenalin. Needless to say that this substance will cause the function of heart and brain to enhance and also a combination of adrenalin and exercise can dwindle cancer disease. Watching movie or reading book can be effective too, however in my estimation being steady and immobile reinforce depression feeling.
The second reason why I advocate doing exercise lies in the fact that it tenders a bed from getting familiar with different people and talking with them and as a result reducing of tiredness. When you go to pool, jugging, hiking apart from obtaining power feeling, this chance will be created for you to meet distinct people with different soul. Sometimes we can look for relaxation in others who are sharing that same activity with us.
I am inclined to empower my arguments by following discussion. There is a different issue here. Nobody could overlook this fact that being fat is a consequence of stress and not relax. Tony Robbins believes that if a person wants to change his life, in first step he has to alter his body. Exercise is the best approach for fitting. In fact when you have a good sense to yourself, spontaneously your body and brain will be relaxed.
By taking all above mentioned arguments, this conclusion could be drawn; a person could use any mechanism in consideration to condition of his life, however because of the striking role of sport in any dimension whether health or social life, it is more worthwhile than other types of activities.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Need some content to compare 'why not watching a movie or reading a book '
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 418 350
No. of Characters: 1979 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.522 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.734 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.539 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.321 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.401 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thwhile than other types of activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, while, apart from, as to, at least, in fact, as a result, by the way, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85645933014 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59595725517 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8470184547 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186878082662 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062756980427 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12489670945 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984233639422 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738502731866 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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