Do you believe in luck, hard working or talent?
Life always extends to cover different fields, as well as human interests and believes. People's believes usually vary from person to person; there are those who believe in luck, hard working and talent, but personally speaking I believe in hard-working.
Those who believe in luck built their believe on accidental things happened for them, also there those who think that possessing some tools brings good luck like having rabbit leg or some kind of rings. However, I strongly believe that there is no such thing called "luck" ,but I'm totally convinced by the fact of the existence of a common thing between luck and hard-working which states that luck believers always do their best to gain whatever they set out to gain, especially, if that is going to bring them good luck. Therefore, we conclude that luck is basically connected to hard-working.
Talented people; on the other hand, are those people who have special skills. Talent is the skill or the ability of doing something well, order to sharpen this talent people have to work hard. Morover, talent can be gained by hard-working as well.
To sum up, it is good to know your talents, but it's better to know how to improve them. Hard working is the best way to upgrade talents and skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... Those who believe in luck built their believe on accidental things happened for them,...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is no such thing called 'luck' ,but Im totally convinced by the fact of ...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...such thing called 'luck' ,but Im totally convinced by the fact of the ex...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sharpening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sharpening
... ability of doing something well, order to sharpen this talent people have to work hard. M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55417875193 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.6470452619 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486217038708 0.236089414692 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188754628704 0.076458572812 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129539867917 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275703282238 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747320471633 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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