Do you think that television programs, movies and video games influence young people's behavior? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
human nature is complex, numerous things affects the human brain. people learn different thing through different process as by reading, listening, through the experiment and so on. Of course, what we see regularly definitely affects our behavior as the statement says. so I think the tv programs influence the people behavior differently as what they have seen .
First of all, talking about the positive influence. I generally prefer to watch the tv show like expedition, documentary and new scientific discovery. my favorite program is the 'Man Vs Wild' which is broadcasted by National Geographic channel. Since I have been watching this program long time ago my preference has been driven. I gradually inclined to the study of wildlife and biodiversity–what I am reading now.
On the other hand the result will not always be same. When you watched the documentary or film like horror movies, fighting and so other kind of things you will behave like differently. my cousin —now just 11 years—accustomed to watch the cartoon and film like horror movies and destroying the things, fighting each other, killing the enemy and war like movies. gradually he is now motivated this kind of things and he became quarrelsome in nature and intractable in day time but he normally very timid in the night. sometimes he is worried with the little strange sound even he behaves abnormally with the known loud sound in the night-time.
Furthermore sometimes these modern technological advancements create the dangerous social consequences. One could imagine this problem, why Nepalese government banned this famous game in Nepal. The report says that the people–especially children, who plays PUBG regularly has problem on doing school tasks and significantly reduce their creativity. Because of its addictive in nature they always play mobile games and scream at night by saying kill, shot, surrend etc, even in the dream too. numerous case has been reported to the police about its easier accessibility on online store so government took actions on it.
so in conclusion, if you watched the positive things and can grasp the positive idea then it will definitely gives you positive vibe otherwise it will hamper our lifestyle. so we have to aware about the consequences before watching the tv programs and other visual things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, i think, in conclusion, kind of, of course, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22666666667 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96661673432 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610666666667 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6845590571 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770784780834 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021167301851 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346322852059 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0404509395793 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300331975647 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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