Children should not be forced by law to be educated by either public schools or home schooling if their parents do not wish them to do so.
Today's children will be the leader of the future. Providing the substantial education to every child is the duty of the parents. Now a days governments are trying to promote the child education, offering by different programs, benefits, to achieve their goal in total literacy. There are different kind of schooling and child can get education either private, or public or home schooling. Though, educating the every child and achieving such goal is providential, but it should not be bounded through any legal means.
First of all, in some cases the education fee is expensive and the parents are not capable to educate in such public school. In Nepal, for example, the per ca pita income of the rural household is less than $1000 per year. With that sum they have to fulfill their daily needs as well as other activities. Some school have mandatory rule to take the extra class– tuition, and coaching—which they can not pay. In many rural household, despite admitting in the school, some of them teach them in the house for basic life sustaining skill. Their children is likely do what their parents did. Take for example, many handicraft practices–the life sustaining skill of rural people, is common in remote area, some parents are involving in making bamboo items, some furniture, some parents are traditionally involved in playing flute and other musical instruments and many other things. Their children is also likely to do so, because they were taught at home.
Most importantly, The public education is not equally distributed in the country, some students have to spend more than 4 hours to go and return from the school. Parents were, afraid whether their offspring will come or not from the school; the geographical structure forest, snowfall and other complication is limiting factor of the rural people. If the education in public school is legally bounded by law, these individual will suffering more. Of course education is necessary to grow enhance the knowledge. It is not only the formal education provides the the life skill, the most of the thing which we learn from home– informal education, is more useful in life rather than what we learn from school. Most of the people never use real life what they have learned in school.
So, In conclusion, the education system is not legally bounded by law; whether public schooling or home schooling. Rather it is the sole right to their parents to enlighten their children as their wish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...every child is the duty of the parents. Now a days goverments are trying to promote the ch...
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Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...y child is the duty of the parents. Now a days goverments are trying to promote the ch...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... for100% literacy. There are different kind of schooling and child can get educatio...
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Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s well as other activities. Some school have mandatory rule to take the extra class–...
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Line 2, column 713, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... is common in remote area, some parents are involving in making bamboo items, some furniture,...
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Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'suffer'
Suggestion: suffer
...y bounded by law, these individual will suffering more. Of course education is necessary ...
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Line 4, column 557, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... not only the formal education provides the the life skill, the most of the thing which...
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Line 4, column 557, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... not only the formal education provides the the life skill, the most of the thing which...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...her public schooling or home schooling. Rather it is the sole right to their parents t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, of course, as well as, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02195121951 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63234920629 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.6459083867 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0476190476 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402318242223 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115155072789 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760612037092 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23553636496 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480540350757 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.