ecause the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer-TPO 31
People have long been seeking ways to lead a pleasant life. While most people argue that living in this rapid pace at which the world is changing makes it hard for people to be happy and satisfied with their lives, I am of the opinion that today, people are living happier in comparison with the people in the past. In the following essay, I will vindicate my stance through two noticeable reasons.
To begin with, the rapid changing of the world provides the opportunity for rapid advancements in technology, making the life of people easier today than that of the past. In this way, the amount of workload people should deal with has dramatically declined, providing them with more leisure time to pursue whatever hobbies and interests make them happy. For instance, today, there are a variety of kitchen appliances like laundry, vacuum cleaner and so forth. In the past, however, there were no appliances, meaning that the work should have been done by people. What my grandmother experience is a compelling example to clarify this. My grandmother had to wash large numbers of clothes by her hands, coping with a physically demanding job. This type of work not only took most of her time and energy but also caused her to contract diseases like arthritis due to using her muscles too much. Also, during the whole day, she was busy doing house chores, having less time to participate in her beloved activities. Had she not lived in the past, she could have experienced a much happier and healthier life, making her more satisfied with her life.
Another equally significant point is that scientists have speeded up the pace of the improvements in medical science due to the fact that the world is changing so quickly. In this regard, people can have a healthier lifestyle, increasing their welfare. To illustrate this, ten years ago, my grandfather died because of cancer. This was because doctors could not able to diagnose his cancer at an early stage of developing due to the lack of necessary equipment. However, two years ago, my mother could be cured after experiencing cancer since the technology had advanced a lot during eight years, helping doctors to cure people. Consequently, the fatality rate has been significantly declined. This example shows that the quicker the world is changing, the faster medical science is improving, helping people to attain more happiness through their healthy lifestyle.
All in all, the fast pace of changing everything in the world has made life happier compared to life in the past. This is because people today have more free time to do their interests and because the development in science makes it possible for people to live longer and healthier. This is why I believe that people today are happier and more satisfied with their lives when it comes to comparison with people in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 719, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the quicker the'. Did you mean 'quicker the'?
Suggestion: quicker the
...antly declined. This example shows that the quicker the world is changing, the faster medical s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91493775934 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55021114836 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50622406639 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6745379658 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.681818182 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273787984002 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765931854999 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811961713514 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191366331767 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637424824999 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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