Essay topics: TPO-04 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Essay topics: TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by hsi on Fri, 06/15/2018 - 00:26

I do not agree with the opinion that there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years because of the following reasons.

Although, because of the advance of technology, some people might anticipate the invention of 'flying cars', and thus the use of 'road cars' might be lesser. But the need of invention of 'flying cars' is created by the growing number of 'road cars'. As a result, although there is certainly the possibility that flying car might come out, the need of ‘road cars’ must still be strong. In addition to that, the short period of time, twenty years, might not be enough to come up with the regulations on the use of flying cars, also, even the corresponding regulations have set up, the price of flying cars might still be expensive. Thus, the publicity of flying cars might still be low, and hence 'road cars' would still be in the main use.

On top of that, capitalism might cause the need for transportation raise, and thus the need for car raise. Capitalism values the efficiency of production and the money earned. In response to the need for efficiency, the production of a product would be highly specialization, that is, if A has the advantage to produce A, B has the advantage to produce B, and A and B need to be assembled to be a product, then A should only make A and B should only make B. In this case, the transportation would be needed to take A and B to a place so that A and B could be assembled. Thus, the more capitalism is prevailed in the world the higher the need for cars.

To conclude, although the technology would advance, the use of cars would still in need because 1) if the flying car has come out, the flying cars might not be mature enough to use and 2) the popularity of capitalism in the world could make the need of cars significant.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... strong. In addition to that, the short period of time, twenty years, might not be enough to c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, thus, in addition, as a result, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 9.8082437276 285% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 43.0788530466 19% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43333333333 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65179911899 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409090909091 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7322858505 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156939278727 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787273093896 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877026271374 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153376987724 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112676783873 0.0645574589148 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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