Friends are very influnial part in our live. It is a paramount thing to keep your friend. But the eqestion is whether it is important to keep old friends or make new friends. This can be weighed in many aspects. To me I prefer to make new friends. Admittedly. Some prefer to keep their old friends because, they feel more comfortable with them. In my opinion, making new friendship is a crucial role to get more skills and knowledege, in addition to increase your social communication.
To begin with, getting new friendships mean we will meet new people. which give you more chance to broaden your horizon and baced skills. this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so you can contact with people with different of back grounds. this connection icrease your information. This is example from my real live. One day, when I was shoping from home depot, I met man who has experience in gardening. And I am very interested with planting. We gat in conversation about types of flower and how we can treat them. after this meeting, we used to give call to each other. furthermore, one day I invited him to my house. we share many information about plants and wich season is better to planting them. As we can see how this new friend help me a lot.
Furthermore, it is boring to meet only limited people, but knowing new ones is very interested and helpful, we are socialized people. We are prefer to be in a group. this will help as to learn alot of skill of communication. If we limited our friendship only with old friend, one day, may be we can not find any one near by. We know very well that every thing in this life may be change. for example, before five years ago I moved with my family to USA and left all my old friend in my home. If I can not make a new friend. how can I continue in my live.Therefore as soon as possible I meel new friend which become an important part in my live.
To sum up, making new friend is very important thing in our live. This is because, broaden our skills, and keeps our social communication.
Friends are very influnial part in our live. It is a paramount thing to keep your friend. But the eqestion is whether it is important to keep old friends or make new friends. This can be weighed in many aspects. To me I prefer to make new friends. Admittedly. Some prefer to keep their old friends because, they feel more comfortable with them. In my opinion, making new friendship is a crucial role to get more skills and knowledege, in addition to increase your social communication.
To begin with, getting new friendships mean we will meet new people. which give you more chance to broaden your horizon and baced skills. this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so you can contact with people with different of back grounds. this connection icrease your information. This is example from my real live. One day, when I was shoping from home depot, I met man who has experience in gardening. And I am very interested with planting. We gat in conversation about types of flower and how we can treat them. after this meeting, we used to give call to each other. furthermore, one day I invited him to my house. we share many information about plants and wich season is better to planting them. As we can see how this new friend help me a lot.
Furthermore, it is boring to meet only limited people, but knowing new ones is very interested and helpful, we are socialized people. We are prefer to be in a group. this will help as to learn alot of skill of communication. If we limited our friendship only with old friend, one day, may be we can not find any one near by. We know very well that every thing in this life may be change. for example, before five years ago I moved with my family to USA and left all my old friend in my home. If I can not make a new friend. how can I continue in my live.Therefore as soon as possible I meel new friend which become an important part in my live.
To sum up, making new friend is very important thing in our live. This is because, broaden our skills, and keeps our social communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37203166227 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56468451709 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503957783641 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4341162843 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1379310345 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0689655172 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13793103448 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493568695752 0.236089414692 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161772020621 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171540004965 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383384411554 0.150856017488 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192634625897 0.0645574589148 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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