Games are as important for adults as they are for children.
All people sometimes play games especially computer games. There is no shadow that games are very interesting and can satisfect everyone. However, the question is wheter games are integral for adults or not? I am defenettaly of the opinion that games are vital for adults for the following reasons.
First of all, I think that games are integral part of getting out from stress. For instance my best friend broke up with his girlfriend. I remember that tese days were horrible for him. He couldn’t get up from his bed, he was crying all day long and even didn’t want to eat anything. He was like a dull. I couldn’t recognize him when I sow him after a week from his braking up. As a best friend I tried to help him. To be honest, I didn’t have any idea what to do in order to help him to get rid of the stress. I tried everything and nothing helped. He doesn’t even want to watch his favorite movie or to eat his favorite dish. However I found a way. I made him play a computer games. At first he didn’t want to do anything byt I made him and it helped. After a few days he began to recover. due to this experience, I strongly belive that games are one of the best ways to eliminate depression.
Secondly, thanks to games people can get rid of loneliness. Time to time people feel loneliness. it can be caused by plenty of reason. indeed, there are a myriad of solutions mot to feel lonely. However, I vehemently believe that playing games is the most beneficial way to annihilate loneliness. While playing you get that unique feeling which helps you to forget about loneliness and continue living happily.
In conclusion, in the light of the reasons mentioned above , I can surely declare that playing games is vital for adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57728706625 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67135912346 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529968454259 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9869640156 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.8076923077 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1923076923 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198612602997 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601288163454 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104987830218 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168660092561 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140996094258 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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