The government should provide the poor and the homeless with houses. Do you agree or disagree
Almost in all country there are people who can not afford home. And some people believe that government has to provide house for homeless, other may argue that they should work harder or survive by themselves. In this essay I will analyze both of the opinion, and why I agree that government has to support such kind of people.
First of all, It will increase the level of the city. If the government begin to keep up poor people, it will promote local town to be more modern and generous. Other countries begin to respect, and perhaps offer to collaborate with them. In addition, when the urban area is disciplined and without homeless people usually encourages tourists or foreign guests to visit the town. For example: I remember when my cousin have business trip in USA, that is famous with a lot of roofless, he was shocked and came back with home without enthusiasm.
Secondly, it promotes the rise of economy considerably. People need convenience to open or develop their talent. So when the controllers of the city offer support, homeless locals will start to create new project or novel that could grow the economy. More well-of people more money to the government.
On the other hand, some may argue that there is no necessary to give them home. People are commonplace, and when they get free thing, their feedback to the world will alter and they will be lazy to develop. In addition, young generations will be motivated, they could see that our world need people who work hard.
To sum up, I strongly believe that providing house for homeless is much more efficient and better than do not help them and led to survive by themselves. This is because this kind of change in the society improve the economy and level of the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72875816993 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4291687426 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7066623761 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146558614113 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394487003026 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510320777359 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079905785568 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609975929958 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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