reading literature
The reading and the lecture are both about the preference of people in reading. Whereas the reading suggest that people read less than they used to, however, the lecturer do not agree and casts doubts on the main points made in the reading by providing three reasons.
Firs of all, the author of the reading states that reading less literature such as novel cause of the decline in level of intellectuals. However, lecturer refutes this point. She suggests that reading less literature does not mean that people stop reading, there are other good written book or even more intellectual , especially in science such as history.
Secondly, the reading states that nowadays people read best seller, which written bad, and it waste of time. Nevertheless the lecture refutes this point. He argues that culture has changed, people interests as well. People watch movies and music video, but they also have many of expression that can improve the knowledge of people.
Finally, the reading states that because of many people are uninterested in reading literature, talented writer publish less, writers are becoming less popular. however, the lecturer believes that the cause of less support for people is authors fault. The publish very difficult book to understand.
In conclusion, although the reading and the lecture are both about today people' preference, the two main points in the reading are effectively challenged by the lecture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22943722944 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50380210286 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3496438106 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9230769231 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369305895238 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127789770798 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130756174346 0.0662205650399 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218654221115 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941067493416 0.0443174109184 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.