cars will less used in twenty years.
One of the most useful inventions that people have created is a car. People use it almost everywhere and now the users of car is increasing constantly. However, some believes that it will not stop even in the future, others believe that life will change, as well as car users will decline in about twenty years. In this essay i will analyse both of the opinion, and show why I agree that the level of car fan will decline.
Firstly, nowadays people try to keep the health in the shape. The reason for that is they want to live more years and enjoy their life. People do sport such as jogging, cycling, and more and more people get involved in this activity, so it will decay cars in the following years. For example, in Europe, especially in Norway there are less car consumers, but a lot of cycle users, and according to the researches their average live is 75 years, and they get ahead others countries significantly.
Another reason is that fuel will not exists forever. This is not novel that after several decades oil and gas will not be available for all. In addition, the fuel will be expensive, so it promotes people use another vehicles. It also possible that we will see new vehicles, that perhaps be more convenience so that it encourages people use it instead of car.
However , some people are sure that cars will serve us for centuries. Because people got used to it and it the most convenience vehicle in the world. Also, The production and the quality of cars are increasing.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the availability of cars will decrease in the following decades. This is because health fans is increasing and the costs of fuel will less available and much more expensive than now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64590163934 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47202512077 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4516853039 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3529411765 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436496576497 0.236089414692 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13136331786 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730526620493 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236792125674 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950650921662 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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