Grades encourage students to learn, use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Education is very important for the improvement of humanity.Each level of education is just as vital such as primary school , high school and university education .The most important thing in education is learning subject and use the learnt things during in our lives.More over to finish our education we have exams and need to get good grades to graduate.However although it looks like grades are the most important thing for education I believe that learning is more important than grades because of some reasons.
The first reason is to be ready to work life when you graduate with a good knowledge.You can find a job quickly.For example when you apply for a job as a new graduate you need to compete other new graduates. If you not only got good grades but also learnt the subject during your education you are most probably the best candidates for job.
The second reason which is also as important as first reason, is when you learn subject and take good grades you feel very happy.We spend lots of time during our education. For a student if the meaning of education is just taking good grades the student is always nervous.Because nobody knows what will be asked during exam. So sometimes every student may fail and the students who think grade is the most important, will be sad. However if you learn the subject but you fail, you have a consolation,because you know you learn the subject.
In conclusion grades encourage students to learn because of some reasons such as to have a good job quickly and to feel more happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Each
...portant for the improvement of humanity.Each level of education is just as vital suc...
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... is just as vital such as primary school , high school and university education .T...
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...l , high school and university education .The most important thing in education is...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...mportant thing in education is learning subject and use the learnt things during in ou...
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Suggestion:
...arning subject and use the learnt things during in our lives.More over to finish ...
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...and need to get good grades to graduate.However although it looks like grades are the m...
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Suggestion: However,
...and need to get good grades to graduate.However although it looks like grades are the m...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good knowledge'.
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...ady to work life when you graduate with a good knowledge.You can find a job quickly.For example ...
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...od grades the student is always nervous.Because nobody knows what will be asked during ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75280898876 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73841704913 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494382022472 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.088305914 48.9658058833 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.625 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.6045352989 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.45110844103 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197499529525 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107472520269 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569830073587 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140326621751 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663282082701 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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