Grades encourage students to work harder at school.Do you agree or disagree?
It is critically important that students remain dedicated to their academic activities by working as hard as possible.In my opinion, I believe that students should always receive grades in any of their classes.I feel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, students who receive grades gain overarching knowledge.This because they remain diligent to their classwork and try as much as possible to absorb a plethora of information, which could be beneficial to them in the future.However, students that aren't graded only have a surface knowledge and as a result, they will always experience difficulty whenever they get job.My personal experience is a clear illustration of this.When I was in my freshman year, i took some biology classes and at the end of each class the professor do give us assignment.So whenever our books are being returned,i always look out for my pitfalls and always ensure I understood the reason why I missed the assignment.With this,I was able to absorb a lot of information.Similarly,I am now enthusiastic with biology as a course such that i thought of teaching biology in future.If i have not been receiving grades in those classes, I would remain insouciant and as a result, i might not be able to discover myself.This example simply demonstrate how getting marks after the completion of classes made me have a comprehensive knowledge.
Further, receiving grades is actually the only means by which the best brains could be detected.A preliminary study conducted by a professor in psychology at the University of Idaho shows that the most efficient way by which the universities could fish out the intelligent ones is to award grades.Drawing from my own experience,My cousin and I attended some some borrowed courses together during our university days.Because of how articulate he was i do see him as a virtuoso,but when we have examinations my marks always surpass him. With this reason, it is certainly clear to see how graded assignment cleared my heart.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that grading students' assignments reinforce students.This is because it makes them a complete person in their field, and because it is the only effective tool that could be used to detect the astute students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, look, similarly, so, thus, i feel, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.152 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24260964862 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554666666667 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.1344086022 372% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 363.237443004 48.9658058833 742% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 386.4 100.406767564 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.0 20.6045352989 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.8 5.45110844103 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.5376344086 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118811701739 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683804703241 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227120896803 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773196290397 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018711531041 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 11.7677419355 342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.65 58.1214874552 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 10.1575268817 320% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.01818996416 143% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.0537634409 318% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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