High ways or public transportation.
Transportation is one of the important factors that have affected greatly in our daily life. Transportation includes different components such as roads, high ways, public transportation and so on. The government often confront a tough decision whether they invest must budget on improving the high ways or public transportation. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that the government should invest more in improving public transportation while others have a negative attitude. As I am concerned, I completely agree with the government should invest in public transportation.
The first and the most reason is that progressive public transportation encourages people to use public transportation and will help to reduce traffic congestion. Due to the no efficient public transportation, many people use the private vehicle, this caused a traffic jam and waste the valuable time of people that stuck in traffic jam. To illustrate that idea, let’s consider the following example. I live in Tehran city one of the crowded city in the world. One of the big problems created as a result of a high population is terrible traffic congestion, especially, during peak hours of the day. Several years ago the government decided gave more attention to this problem and with a practical plan they devoted most of the budget of Tehran city to the establishment of metro and renovation of the public bus. This plan has a great effect on the decrease of traffic jam in the city. Many residents use public transportation with modern facilities. Additionally, using public transportation will prevent air pollution. As you know, one of the most reason that caused air pollution is driving a private car. If people encourage to use a public vehicle, this would be a big help. Furthermore, extra costs for gas, preservation, and insurance decline by use of public transportation.
On the other side, investing in developing the roads and high way assist in the improvement of commuting between cities and will reduce the rate of accidents. For example, my neighbor has a car accident and damaged her brain because of this he loses the ability to walk. When police seek the main problem, evidence showed that inappropriate condition of the road was the main cause of an accident. So, investing in the restoration of roads seems advisor choose too.
By way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that most part of the government budget should spend on the progress of public transportation because of some issues such traffic jam and air pollution that we confront today with them. Although, part of the money could use to the perfection of the roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1136, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...ving a private car. If people encourage to use a public vehicle, this would be a big h...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ution that we confront today with them. Although, part of the money could use to the per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, such as, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 34.0 8.0752688172 421% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11990950226 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07037248543 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497737556561 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0198094021 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3913043478 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2173913043 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303712103783 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829687283669 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927353001051 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170097219124 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952607130485 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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