If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
People have long been seeking ways to find a decent job. Most people argue that humans should not lose the opportunity to get a secure job. However, I am of the opinion that it is of more benefit for human beings to wait until they find a more satisfying job. In the following essay, I will vindicate my stance through two noticeable reasons.
To begin with, having a satisfying job can bring you more happiness. In this regard, you will make few mistakes in your job as you are interested in it or the job is akin to your skills. In fact, the anxiety and stress you feel will relieve, reducing the chances of suffering from physical or mental diseases. For instance, last day, I read an article in the field of stress-induced illnesses. The author suggested that the more job satisfaction and interest people have, the better they will work, committing fewer mistakes. As a result of this, the anxiety they feel like the fear of getting fired because of the making many errors decreased, experiencing a healthier and more enjoyable life.
Another equally significant point is that when you have a job that you enjoy doing this, the chances of flourishing in your occupation will augment as you are interested in your job. In other words, you can get a promotion very soon. What I experienced is a compelling example to clarify this. Two years ago, I worked in a pizza restaurant which I did not like. Giving people the wrong order and working carelessly, I got fired. After that, I explored the job that suits my interest. Fortunately, I hired in the hospital which was similar to both my interest and my competence. Having spent a lot of time trying to improve my performance for example, by studying the fact that how I can treat well with sick people, I recognized as the best nurse in this hospital. As a result of this, I got career progression very soon. Had I continued to work in the pizza restaurant, I could not have experienced thriving in my profession.
All in all, it is more beneficial for people to take part in a job that is more satisfying. This is because not only can they have the feeling of happiness as they are reducing the diseases caused by strenuous jobs but they can also thrive in their career since they are experiencing success more easily. This is why I really prefer to have a pleasing job rather than a secure job.
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- TPO 28 71
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 70
- parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past-TPO 28 71
- teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. 70
- TPO 25 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6018957346 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65357985376 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518957345972 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2174935579 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4347826087 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381609312576 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107366681215 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107254030451 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268400693047 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120583530901 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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