Every country has problems some of them small some of them big. The one thing I would like to change in my country is its higher education system, especially among the private colleges. I will explore a few reasons for that in the following essay.
Firstly, education is one of the most important aspects for countries growth, if the country does not provide a good education to its citizen it will never achieve the full potential of its citizen. In my country, India the education system is not what we call it ideal even it is far from ideal. Here, we have more than 60% of population i.e 720 million people below the age of 35 and still many international companies are out of white-collar employe or skilled labor. In our country, most of the population is living in semi-urban or village areas where there are no colleges or universities, for higher education people come to urban cities. Moreover, there are no vocational training centers for people who simply want a good training to become a skilled laborer.
Secondly, in my country, we have very few colleges which are exceptional in higher studies like IIT's, NIT's and some of the medical colleges like AIIMS etc. but the problem is that they provide only 30000 seats and around 20 lacs of people give these college entrance test. The selection rate is just above 1%. the rest of 99% does not have a good degree nor they got jobs at the end of their graduation because companies also hire from those prestigious colleges first.
So, I want from the government that they should consider not only 1% of elite students but also take care of that 99 % by increasing the standard of higher education in private colleges. Also, they should open training centers for people who want to be a blue collar employee.
In conclusion, I want to change my countries higher education system because currently, it does not account for the majority of people who are not studying in prestigious colleges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75294117647 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55903038134 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538235294118 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4512105233 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660294038887 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245287804735 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381339076565 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425655835404 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384345348243 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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