Sometimes feel that we want to go back to the past, even it is good or bad memory, we just want to live it again. To change things which is wrong at that time, or we learn lessons after we remember the scene.
About me, if I could go back to the past, I want to back to my high school period. It was a magnificent period, has a lot of memories some of them good and some of them bad which I feel sad when I remember them.
To begin with, in 10th grade I was very shy that I didn't have friends I was just taken care of my study, but, then I began to create my friends' circle, they were good and friendly, and they told me that they thought about me I am a complex person , but, when they recognized on my personality they realized that they were wrong. And I regretted because I spent a lot of time without their friendship.
And, I have lost a lot of time without learning the sport, because in the beginning, I didn't like it, but, my teacher named Waleed, he Started to make the sport interesting for me, I remembered one of the days he told me that if I play an important move in the volleyball, and I should make the ball go through The dividing line between the two teams at least 3 times out of 5, he would give me 20 marks, then I throw it 4 times so I took the 20 marks. Now I feel sad because lots of time go without playing sports.
Also, I feel very happy when I remember the projects which I made in the school, for example, When I discussed an important subject in chemistry, and my teacher told me that I explained it by Scientific way. And, I made a presentation on a subject in Religion and my friends asked questions to confuse me, but, I could answer them with confidence, and my tutor was satisfied with my project.
To conclusion, when we go back through our past that may help us to learn how to provide some mistakes because even the memories happy or sad, but, they will still our experience which teaches us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, then, at least, for example, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1312335958 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37771282324 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488188976378 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.995657575 48.9658058833 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.090909091 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6363636364 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14508042922 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717247880457 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534891952526 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869742385307 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496132493453 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.27 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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