If you want to choose a purpose, which one do you
choose?
• Helping other people
• Enhancing time management
• Improving physical well-being and eating healthy food
Nowadays, humankind is encountered various diseases and disorders such as cancers, nutrition deficiency, etc. It is very critical and essential to take more attention and time to health and well-being. I utterly agree with this notion that the human should pay more attention to their health through sanitation and proper nutritional plan. I feel this way and explore it for the following reasons.
first and foremost reason to substantiate my standpoint is that the human is desiring to increase life longevity. No one can deny the role of well-being and consume nutritional food in the life expectancy process. According to the scientific investigation of medical physicians and nutritional specialist, in some prosperous and affluent countries that the people are more likely to utilize healthy food and more care about sanitation, the life expectancy is nearly 75-87 years. Meanwhile, deprivileged countries were evaluated significantly less than 60 years. Should the government and people have a healthy lifestyle through healthy nutrition and checking health status regularly during their lifetime, they will have a prosperous and happy life without pain and concern regarding their well-being.
In the second reason to corroborate my viewpoint, if the human pay more attention through more investment on their health and well-being, they will succeed to other purposes better, such as time management and helping others. Without a vigorous and healthy body, the person can not help other people because they already can not satisfy their own needs with a sick body. Meanwhile, even worse, an unhealthy person can not manage their own time because sometimes a disorder could disturb routine and essential activity and schedule. My example is compelling evidence to justify this matter. When I was a graduate student, I was taking more time on my thesis and research with enough attention to my health to reach my goals as soon as possible. I am currently suffering from physical problems such as muscle spasticity and neck pain, which caused the delay in reaching my plan on time. Had I provided more pay attention to my health through high-quality food and exercise, regular check-ups. I will meet my desire on time without any pains and disorder.
To reach a comprehensive conclusion, pay more attention to foods and health would lead me to a prosperous and effective lifestyle that I could reach to other purposes, such as helping people and time management. Moreover, I will have more life expectancy with less pain and suffer from a disorder that I could prevent in the past by some facile steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, while, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73347436172 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 420.0 20.1344086022 2086% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2150.0 100.406767564 2141% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 420.0 20.6045352989 2038% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 72.0 5.45110844103 1321% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129425912738 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129425912738 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810443727264 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428036930365 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 212.7 11.7677419355 1807% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -354.82 58.1214874552 -610% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 167.1 10.1575268817 1645% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.9 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.12 8.01818996416 351% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 10.002688172 580% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 170.0 10.0537634409 1691% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.247311828 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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