If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?
1. Find a roommate to share a room
2. Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently
3. Buy cheap foods and cook home (do not often eat outside)
There are some moot points about, reducing living cost. Everyone has their own zeitgeist. some people suggest to share Our room, others recommend to buy inexpensive food and expensive technology. I assert that find a roommate and share A room is the best way to reducing our expenses. I would like to confirm my opinion in the following example.
First and foremost, nowadays rent a small room is very expensive, we should expense half of our income to rent a small Room, therefore if we find a roommate and share this rend it can help to reduce our cost.
We know the more rent, the more cost consequently, sharing rent lead to decline expenses.
For example when I was a student I rented a small room in the countryside and the lease for that room was too high for me And I could not afford my tuition fee and room lease thus, I decided to advertise in the university billboard to share my Room with the other student, after that I found a kind roommate who accepted to share the lease of room between us. this Action led to I could afford my tuition fee and save my money more than that time when I was alone.
Secondly, besides the advantage of sharing room rent expenses, finding a roommate has other benefits. this action helps To share other things like foods and electricities and internet costs.
For example, when I found a roommate we decided to each other undertook ingredient of meal expenses for three times a Week. if I want to live alone, I should make food every day and my costs increase dramatically but, in this situation I could Expense only in three days consequently, I spend less money and save more money.
As a result, sharing a room with a roommate have many advantages. this action not only leads to reduce our lease cost but Also decline other expenses such as food and facilities expenses. I absolutely recommend to people especially students to Share their house with a roommate and exploit of these benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...cost. Everyone has their own zeitgeist. some people suggest to share our room, other...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend buying'.
Suggestion: recommend buying
...eople suggest to share our room, others recommend to buy inexpensive food and expensive technolo...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...rend it can help to reduce our cost. we know the more rent, the more cost conse...
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Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... finding a roommate has other benefits. this action helps to share other things like...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...f meal expenses for three times a week. if I want to live alone, I should make foo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...m with a roommate have many advantages. this action not only leads to reduce our lea...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmate and exploit of these benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66858789625 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54341338686 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484149855908 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4627922178 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164637016688 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649995189488 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455179447545 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901309804395 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549162625143 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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