In contemporary life, it is indisputable that teachers have played a pivotal role in both individual's life and society and they have been affected the students' live in several aspects. some people take the view that there is not any correlation between teachers' salary and quality of education. However, as far as I concerned, I believe that salary is a major incentive for a teacher to work harder. there seen to be numbers of matter associated with these tasks. I would explore some of the main issues which are more conspicuous for me in the following essay.
First and foremost, despite the facts that majority of a teacher have oped this major due to they have wanted to contribute something valuable to society but there are numbers of teachers that have appointed this vocation because of salary. If they don't get suffice money as salary, they will not work hard in order to bring up the students, so, it will affect both society and individual's lives which will contribute several negative problems through life such as they make the students more indifference for their diurnal tasks. my personal experience would be a great example of this issue, I remember when I was a child I attended to one of my school course, and I had a teacher who did not get sufficient salary, because of that teaching was not his priority which caused majority of students to become more antipathy to their school works.
secondly, in these days our life has turned more complicated due to the financial crisis, due to this hard situation people have to work hard in order to earn money to livelihood and subsist peacefully, and teachers are nor exceptional in this way. If they do not get enough money they will have to apply for another part-time occupation to supplement their income which will absolutely affect their performance in school time. the statistic shows that people with more than two jobs are more likely to have less concentration of their affair rather than people who have just one particular job. Subsequently, the government can do a lot to contracts this problem by disbursing more money on salaries for a university professor.
Sum up, due to the aforementioned reason that I have discussed above, it can be surmised that insufficient salary has a deleterious effect on both children and teacher performance which will make a socially retarded. Thus, I advocate of a theory which university should spend more money on salaries for university professors because both student and professors will take advantage of paying increments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9324009324 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74738465258 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491841491841 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3381021344 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.142857143 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6428571429 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207695824463 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860753039302 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103580386811 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145751856447 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768994573173 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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