Thanks to the advance of technology our life becomes more complicated, therefore, consulting has become one of the prominent aspects of everyone’s lives which are significant requirements for overcoming obstacles in modern life. The views differ considerably when it comes to this issue of whether people rely on someone else to an important decision. Some people take that view that it is imperative that a should make an important decision alone because it will help people to prosper earlier. On the other hand, the majority of people believe that it’s imperative to consult with someone else due to they can take advantage of their conception. as far as I concerned, my personal and actual observation of life let me agree with that statement. The number of benefits over this issue are overwhelming, I would explore some of the main benefits which are more conspicuous for me in the following statement.
The first significant benefit to be mentioned is that counseling with other people and using their wisdom will provide people opportunity to take advantage of a variety of people’s perception and experience which help people to open up their mind about what’s going around them. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, when I had to decide which course to take in the university I talked to the university consoler, he had the sufficient knowledge and expertise to help me determine which course were best for my future carrier. if I hadn’t counseled with my professor with that particular subject I would not have been able to fulfill the teacher’s expectation in the university.
Secondly, it is indisputable that everyone in his/her lives needs other people to help them, if you look at the scientist and great explorer through the history, you will obviously see that their successes were depended on they didn’t make a decision by their own even self-conceited scientist.
Furthermore, people’s advice will teach you how to avoid form similar mistakes which they did in the past, for intense when one of my favorite friends graduated from high school he had hesitated between civil engineer and agriculture so he ended up with civil engineer after a while he noticed that he made a mistake because this was not what he wants, accordingly after 2 years I stuck to the same situation so since I got his advice I ran away from difficulties, thus if I hadn’t advised with my friend I wouldn’t have ran away from catastrophe. If you make a decision by yourself, you need to accept all the consequent.
Due to the aforementioned reasons I’ve discussed above, I suggest that before you make an irrevocable decision you need to survey the situation and consider all the consequent and advice with someone who is expertise to that subject, therefore, with this straightforward structure you always refrain from mistakes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
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Suggestion: some
...issue are overwhelming, I would explore some of the main benefits which are more conspicuou...
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Suggestion: If
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Suggestion: run
...sed with my friend I wouldn't have ran away from catastrophe. If you make a de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12658227848 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0546104527 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521097046414 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.794315983 48.9658058833 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.923076923 100.406767564 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4615384615 20.6045352989 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168762493999 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742134375948 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562273036691 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101502294343 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469158726589 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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