It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's hectic world in which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. In fact, working in a group is one way that majority of people prefer to work and reach their pinnacle of their life. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether being leader in a team can be beneficial or being as a member. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that although people can take advantage of being leader or member in a group, they can do their best as a member with less stress. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that we all know that working in a group has some difficulties and either leader or member should bend over backwards to work effectively. Scientifically speaking, a leader should always take the responsibility of everything that have been done in a group. In fact, not only should a leader make a sound decision but also should always come up with new and the best ideas. As my point of view, leaders are always under pressure and if they could not handle the problems efficiently they run into a huge problem which jeopardize their position. Delving further into the issue reveal that members can work in a team with lower stress and not only can patronize group to progress but also can gain myriads of experiences that are helpful for their improvement. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that a plethora of people who work in a group as a member have been more successful in their career rather than a leader because they just concentrate on their works without being distracted by presence of other stressful matters.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that members are more likely to be experienced and learned people. Broadly speaking, members are more involved in the process of work and when they confront obstacles do their best and try to overcome difficulties which help them not only enhance their experiences but also develop their self-confidence. To put it in other word, although leaders are core of the group and are able to make a right decision in critical situations, hardly ever can they progress in their career and become learned and proficient people. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, leaders are those who always come up with effective solutions and the success of a group greatly depend on a leader because their characteristics enable them to lead a team properly. In addition they have more leisure time during working hours and can carry out other activities and make plans for every single facet of their career. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, being a member or a leader in a group has its own merits and drawbacks which both play a significant role in the success of a team. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that a member can work in a group with lower stress and pressure and can do his or her best in order to gain the best results. Additionally, members are more likely to progress because they are all in the process of works and can be learned people in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...re likely to be experienced and learned people. Broadly speaking, members are more inv...
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Line 5, column 900, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...enable them to lead a team properly. In addition they have more leisure time during work...
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Line 7, column 450, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...the process of works and can be learned people in the long run.
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can be learned people in the long run.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215408805031 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.168238993711 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0707547169811 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0691823899371 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0566037735849 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132075471698 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0471698113208 0.0351676179071 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76302497513 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235849056604 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00786163522013 0.00188951952338 416% => OK
Determiners: 0.0974842767296 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0283018867925 0.0209618222197 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3454.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 596.0 408.028673835 146% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79530201342 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33389261745 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228187919463 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14932885906 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0973154362416 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76302497513 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456375838926 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.1900365575 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 28.380952381 20.5533526081 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3680044761 48.84282405 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.476190476 120.699889404 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.380952381 20.5533526081 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 51.1997443273 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.3422459893 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333962358747 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117203689109 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0773869960195 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.498151839367 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140107421761 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138558866752 0.114077575197 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734927607603 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.497353854722 0.336927656856 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00792495372703 0.067059652881 12% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265397959887 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283097604036 0.0618886996521 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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