Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future?
There are two attitude about spending money. Some people believe it is better to spend whole money whereas, others believe to save part of it for future. In my point of view it is better to save a proportion of our money for future. This essay will support this idea by reasons which will mention in following paragraphs.
First of all, future is unpredictable and we cannot have certain plan for future. So we have to have several scenarios to face in proper way with future events. One of them is saving money for the coming days. There are several emergency time in our lives such as disease, death, wedding party, natural disaster etc. So it is better to save a proportion of our money for future to spend in these cases which leads to have certain and bright future life. Moreover, we are responsible about our children’s future. We need to allocate a part of our money to guarantee their future and pay for their education fees. According to the recent research that done by family aid corporation (FAC), child who inherent property and money from their parents have better life and more comfortable live in contrast with who has poor family. Donald Trump is the best example of success man who inherent his money from his father.
Furthermore, because of economic situation it is possible to lose our job. In order to continuing life we need to have money which was saved from before. One of the most significant merits of the saving money, is investing in stock market. However, it is risky investing, but most of time the value of your money will increase and earn more money. Also it helps to develop of country and next generation will have better life.
In conclusion, I believe it is better to save money for future and do not spent all of it at present time. Some reasons were presented to support this idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...oney will increase and earn more money. Also it helps to develop of country and next...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63384615385 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42764356001 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5376912587 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399596604243 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123461269378 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102812035845 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262976240895 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198154090359 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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