It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
As we are seeing in local news everywhere a new movie theatre is probably are going to build in the next few months. It could affect our area in some positive ways which makes me strongly support this plan. As our neighbourhood is a remote place from downtown there are not much modern places for entertainment as there are in downtown. Constructing a new movie theatre in our hometown is a good news which brings us happiness for two main reasons and me like many others in our neighbourhood are looking forward to that day.
First of all, If this new movie theatre built we don’t have to travel much in weekend and other days for seeing a movie and all we need to do is gather together and take a walk for just couple minutes to reach there. It render that we save more money and have more opportunity to see more movie because in this case we need much lesser time and money to spend on a seeing a movie.
Second of all, as the newspaper reported in the last week interview with mayor, the new movie theatre is going to build with the best material and best equipment that a first class movie theatre needed. With some advertisement it could attract people from adjacent places to come visit this new movie theatre and as a sequence it affect positively the jobs here. Job vacancies is going to be exist more than what we are experiencing these days.
To sum up, building a new movie theatre is going to be absolutely fantastic in our neighbourhood in terms of convenience for people who lives in this area as they need less time and energy to consume for seeing a movie. Moreover, it attracts more attention from people who lives in our nearby to come to see a movie in our neighbourhood which brings us more job opportunities.
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- It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 60
- It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As we are seeing in local news everywhere ...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...rywhere a new movie theatre is probably are going to build in the next few months. ...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'renders'?
Suggestion: renders
... just couple minutes to reach there. It render that we save more money and have more o...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... new movie theatre and as a sequence it affect positively the jobs here. Job vacancies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47798742138 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54197000118 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477987421384 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5447443128 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123033526083 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537885435235 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316279622957 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790029180156 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133880070609 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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