It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Restaurants are places were business people, family and friends can enjoy a delicious meal, escape from ordinary life and have a moment to relax and dine. I strongly support this plan because the new project will bring more festivity to the neighborhood. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, having a new eatery place in the community will relieve the burden of daily live. It is a reality today that many families struggle with lack of time when it comes to prepare a meal for the family. Moreover, it is difficult in modern society to find the adequate time to take care of our love ones. For this reason, mothers bring to the table the first meal they can elaborate, sometimes fast food, because long working and driving hours only produce stress and time away from family. On the other hand, having such places in the community will allow the family to spend more time together and represent a big relief when family come to visit us. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember last week when my brother came to visit us from New York. It was a long day at work and, as always, they came without previous notice. I did not have any food ready, not enough food in the fridge. Just about time I remembered the new restaurant, very close from where we live. I sent my husband to the new place and after twenty minutes, we were able to eat a delicious meal in our own table, all the family together, talking loudly and taking pictures, as we always do.
Secondly, the new restaurant will bring more job opportunities to the community. That is, the new place will need more workers and business in the nearby will be benefit because the new army of workers will need clothes, shoes, lunches. Moreover, the traffic will increase as well because more people will visit our town. On the other hand, with the taxes paid by this new restaurant, the budget of the community will increase tremendously, and the services give to residents will be more, with better quality. Another personal experience, I remember when I bought my house a few years ago. The neighborhood was small and quiet, with affordable mortgages, few cars on the road and silent and boring places to visit. Starting two years ago, new houses and complex apartments were built, along with other amenities, and people started moving-in in a short time. Nowadays, thanks to the new restaurant and other shopping places, theaters and museums that have been built, the neighborhood where I live became in an affordable and friendly municipality.
To conclude, I strongly support the construction of the new restaurant. This is because our community will have a new place to visit, relax and dine and because will bring more job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71810699588 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51405050969 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.727861532 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5416666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128518324693 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432805885679 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478282990168 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998765654621 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363045500401 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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