The announcement of a new restaurant to be built in my neighborhood may be faced with either approval or rejection from my neighbors. Although some people may be enthusiastic to hear about this announcement, I am not personally in favor of it because of different reasons. The main reason for my objection is my concern of not finding a parking spot for my car, the dirt and smell that might be caused by the new restaurant, and the decrease in the value of property in the area.
First, A new restaurant in the neighborhood may cause a decrease in housing demand and ultimately a decrease in the value of property. A new restaurant in the neighborhood may provide food at times when a person is unable to cook. However, it is a cause for a decrease in price of real estate. Generally, When a restaurant is built in a certain place, people loose interest in living in such a place. For example, a couple of years ago, a new restaurant was built on a land next to my friend's house. Because of the noise it caused, a lot of people lost interest in residing in our neighborhood. Therefore, many residents moved to live in another area.
Second, customers coming to the restaurants will occupy the vacant parking spots. As we understood, the restaurant's owners were not able to find a peace of land to make it as a parking area. Thus, it is expected that customers would park on the main street and occupy the parking areas of residents.There are eight apartments in my building, and every family in those apartment own two cars on average. In total, there is a need for sixteen parking spots on the main street. Having this in mind, a restaurant built in the area would cause a major problem of finding a place to park. Therefore, if a letter of approval is distributed by restaurant's owners to get neighbors approval, It is most likely that I deny it.
Finally, a new restaurant built in the area might cause the presence of dirt and rodents.while some regulations control the compliance of restaurant's staff to clean standards, Sometimes workers in the restaurant do not comply with these rules and regulations. As a result, this would cause the spread of rodents like rats and insects which is not healthy for the environment. Such a problem would cause diseases to be spread in the area and as a result residents would be negatively affected with it.
In conclusion, The decision to build a restaurant in the area might have advantages and disadvantage. In my opinion,Such a project, would cause more harm because it a decrease the value of the property. Moreover, it is causes a deficiency in the parking spots available for our cars
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: There
...d occupy the parking areas of residents.There are eight apartments in my building, an...
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Message: Did you mean 'this apartment' or 'those apartments'?
Suggestion: this apartment; those apartments
...nts in my building, and every family in those apartment own two cars on average. In total, ther...
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Suggestion: , Such
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68240343348 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92182965702 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452789699571 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5934390021 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1818181818 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158263077474 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514887924349 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511310586145 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945211959403 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538605387923 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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