It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Although our neighborhood is quite large and has a population of about a 2,000 people, it barely has any restaurants or other sources of entertainment. I do feel that a new restaurant should be built in my neighborhood for two reasons.
To begin with, my neighborhood only has about three to four restaurants that are located in very isolated areas and are considered quite unsafe. For example, I was once going over to my friend's place and I had to pass through that area, there I saw a woman being mugged. There have been countless such instances and it is now that the mayor has started to do something about it. This forces my family to go to restaurants that are located really far from home which results in wastage of fuel. Because of the current situation, our neighborhood is desparately in need of a new restaurant.
Secondly, these restaurants are very poorly maintained and are not popular at all. For instance, my family and I decided to pay a visit to one of the restaurants and I ordered spaghetti with meatballs, my love for the dish was absolutely demolished when I found a roach floating in the sauce. For this reason, I feel that a new restaurant should be built as soon as possible.
In conclusion, the bad location and poor maintenance of the restaurants in my neighborhood puts us in a situation where we desparately need a restaurant that is located in a lively area and is maintained properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69322709163 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97667423721 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545816733068 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3557107305 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.090909091 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164330000055 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758569933903 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641218797221 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109448474031 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356120081063 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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