It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Restaurants are in trend today, every city has many of such local food junctions where people socialize and spend some quality time. If a new restaurants is a declared to open in my neighborhood then, I myself being a foodie will totally support with this idea.
To begin with, a restaurant can be a new hangout place for family, friends and college students. Everybody want to spend some quality with there loved once every now and then, restaurants can serve this requirement of people. People can visit restaurant and have food when they are not in mood to cook or when they just to relax. Restaurants and also gain by serving customers with quality food. In addition to this, Restaurants can also be used as party hall to celebrate special occasions. Further more students and friends will get a hangout area.
Furthermore, Restaurants can open job opportunities in for locals. With new restaurant there come job opportunities specially for the young generation. They can work in part time jobs in the restaurants and earn they daily expenses. Along with the part time job students can earn some extra money which they can invest in there higher education. Even elderly people can also take jobs in such restaurants.
Lastly, Neighborhood develops with the new food junction. Neighborhood view will be modified as the with new restaurants will be the new attraction and new parking lots will created. And as the the area next to the restaurants can be upgraded into shopping complex by the locals. So neighborhood view can completed be changed. And If restaurants become will be famous they it may attract people from there neighborhood to come to our neighborhood and might also raise business so the shopping complex.
In conclusion, The new resturants opens many hopes for the locals and if so, why not to support it, when something good can happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'restaurant'?
Suggestion: restaurant
...e and spend some quality time. If a new restaurants is a declared to open in my neighborhoo...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...pend some quality with there loved once every now and then, restaurants can serve this requirement...
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Line 11, column 170, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... the young generation. They can work in part time jobs in the restaurants and earn they d...
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Line 11, column 249, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...arn they daily expenses. Along with the part time job students can earn some extra money ...
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Line 17, column 175, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...ew attraction and new parking lots will created. And as the the area next to the restau...
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Line 17, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d new parking lots will created. And as the the area next to the restaurants can be upg...
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Line 17, column 191, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d new parking lots will created. And as the the area next to the restaurants can be upg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, lastly, may, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99681528662 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76346701981 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509554140127 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1128348801 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5789473684 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174884042428 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066020977211 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526573499373 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113425017332 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471240438088 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.