It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer
There are deferring opinion on borrowing money from a friend can harm and damage the friendship or not. In today's world where a person's success is measured in terms of the money or wealth, the person has earned and money drives almost everything in this world, I think money borrowing money from a friend can make the friendship bitter.
First, Not everybody i say i am friends with are not true friends. We meet lots of people every day, out the these like we become friends with some of them. Its not need we are friends with them just because we like them. We or they can be friends because of many reasons like fame, status, personal selfish and more. So basically these people might not be my true friends and not reliable. Lending money to these friends or borrowing money from these friends will lead to a bad relationship.
secondly, based on human tendency i can say friends won't be happy if the other friend is doing good. For instance, lets's assume Jack and shaam are two friends. Jacks wants to start a new business and seeks financial help from shaam and shaam agree's to him. Jack starts the business and business grows nicely. its been 2 years that shaam has given the money and for some personal emergency he wants the money back from jack but jack can't give the money right away and all these harm their relationship.
Lastly, I would say exception do exist, If i have enough money and one of my closet friend whom i can believe, in that scenario i can consider lending money to them. As i know they will be there when i need them . or vise Versa I can borrow from them, as i know i will return the money soon.
In conclusion, since friendship is like plain paper once crushed, the lines will always be there, i believe money borrowed can damage or har the friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50458715596 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25668869975 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8278865235 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264992048949 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094945328185 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861041759607 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163815033659 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058014451689 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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