It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Sometime
...e thought.WE have to face many problems.Sometime we have to take help from different peo...
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...m mostly we take help from our friends. good friend are .always ready to help us in ...
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...e help from our friends. good friend are .always ready to help us in any situation...
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... friendship not every one can gave money to their friend. In our life money is a...
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...ur life money is a very important to us.We have to do many struggle to earn money....
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun struggle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many struggles'.
Suggestion: many struggles
...is a very important to us.We have to do many struggle to earn money.We cannot easily trust th...
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... have to do many struggle to earn money.We cannot easily trust the people to gave ...
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Suggestion: Some
... people do not return the money in time.Some friends are disappear after taking the ...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: disappeared
...turn the money in time.Some friends are disappear after taking the money and they do not ...
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Suggestion: .
...ing the money and they do not contact us .financing someone is very difficult to u...
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Suggestion: Many
...nancing someone is very difficult to us.Many friend get separated because of money i...
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Suggestion: In
...nd get separated because of money issue.In our life time we have to fight for many...
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Suggestion: lifetime
...separated because of money issue.In our life time we have to fight for many problems one ...
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...t for many problems one of them is money .Most of the people are suffering from th...
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...for many problems one of them is money .Most of the people are suffering from this p...
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Suggestion: In
... people are suffering from this problem.In every steps people have to borrow money...
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Suggestion: .
... people have to borrow money from friend .people cannot afford money when they nee...
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Suggestion:
... they have to borrow with friend but not every friend manage to gave the money in...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fight seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fights'.
Suggestion: many fights
...w their friendship can damage. I saw a many fight which is doing for money.Last time when...
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Suggestion: Last
...w a many fight which is doing for money.Last time when i used to live in a hostel on...
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Suggestion: I
...which is doing for money.Last time when i used to live in a hostel one of my frie...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...ive in a hostel one of my friend borrow a money with her best friend and she promised h...
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Suggestion: Money
...taking with each other because of money.Money affect their good friendship.I saw more...
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Suggestion: I
...oney.Money affect their good friendship.I saw more many fight with friend because...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fight seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fights'.
Suggestion: many fights
...affect their good friendship.I saw more many fight with friend because of money.In my expe...
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Suggestion: In
...many fight with friend because of money.In my experience i think borrowing money f...
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Suggestion: I
...riend because of money.In my experience i think borrowing money from a friend is ...
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Suggestion: , if
...But if we can able to gave money in time,if our friend trust us i do not think thei...
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...ve money in time,if our friend trust us i do not think their is a problem in our ...
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...e,if our friend trust us i do not think their is a problem in our friendship.friendsh...
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Suggestion: So
...riendship.friendship is all about trust.So the friend who can not trust each other...
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...d who can not trust each other they can broke their friendship.Not every one but most...
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Suggestion: Not
...h other they can broke their friendship.Not every one but most of the friend damage...
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... ship by borrowing money from a friend. .
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Suggestion: .
... borrowing money from a friend. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37336814621 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47293153034 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394255874674 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.40137994 48.9658058833 444% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.0 100.406767564 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.6 20.6045352989 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.5376344086 632% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249696651751 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163569378577 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646632894477 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180958284288 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383059593657 0.0645574589148 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 11.7677419355 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.26 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.1575268817 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.25 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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