it is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlike that will affect your daily life.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that all people belonging to one single bigger humankind group. People living in the world is very similar to the conservation of energy law in physic that energy does not die but it changes from one shape to other. Each event that occurs in the world can affect other people living in distant areas. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that following news from different countries is just wasting time. However, I to a great extent, agree with this idea that it is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlike that will affect your daily life.
First and foremost, it is our moral task to take attention and be responsible to other people life condition and their problems. For instance, three years ago, a strong earthquake happened in Nepal. It was one of the most powerful earthquakes in recent years that created huge distortion to houses and cities facilities and kill a lot of people. In my country Iran, when people awarded this disaster in Nepal they provided some essential products and money to send Nepal. I believe that Nepalian nation could not raise from this unfortunate happen without help from different countries.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that news provides valuable resources of information about cultural values, lifestyle, political situation and economy condition in different countries. Today, through widespread news networks, people simply can know other people in very far part of the world, without spending the time to read and research about them. It can lead to overall progress in cultural values in the world.
Finally, yet importantly, may someone think happens in another part of the world have not any impact on their daily life. While this view is not entirely true. For example, global warming is a fact that influence human life in all continents. So all people should be sensitive to industrials that produce pollution and force governments to establish legal to limit these harmful activities.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I convinced that it is important to following events that happen around the world. Because of our human responsibility, its cultural advantages and global concerns.
- TPO 39 3
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs. Agree or disagree? 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. 76
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 76
- For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ave not any impact on their daily life. While this view is not entirely true. For exa...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'follow'?
Suggestion: follow
...ve, I convinced that it is important to following events that happen around the world. Be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1170212766 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6072295629 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0429148731 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.263157895 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309946504095 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856910078652 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160936571912 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156241065532 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110616375758 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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