it is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours
In today’s progressive and enlightened world where we are living, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of individuals’ profession since it does trigger imperative impacts on both their mental health and their career perspective. The controversial question is whether having a three work-day job in a week with long hours is more delightful and beneficial than working in five days of a week for shorter hours. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I’m inclined to claim my opposition regarding operating in less days with extra hours. I Feel this way for some cogent reasons, which I will explore in following essay to empower my vantage point.
First and foremost, it is established beyond doubt that every company would lose its great profit-making opportunity each day it cuts off working. Obviously, we can’t even approximately estimate how much a company would be unprofitable in one day. Everyday, we are reading or hearing of prosperous people who have run their own business or have set up a company in newspapers and televisions. Without exception all of them mention the renowned proverb “Time is gold”. Additionally, they wake up early in the morning and stay awake at nights and also, they work seven days of a week. Only until my father have endeavored to have a new start-up did I comprehend the value of time. He worked day and night all year round. Thus, today he becomes a succeed producer in our industrial city since hard-work always brings rewards and in this case the reward is plentiful.
The other equally important reason which I like to explain lies on the reality of the more weekend days are, the more tired human is getting. Last year I browsed websites to find topics associating with this matter. Almost all of them concluded that stuff having too much leisure time than usual are always feeling more exhaustion in the beginning of the week. Although an immense number of people who are of the opinion that did employees have more free time, they would be more cheerful and be able to enhance their internal skills by attending some classes, researches hold the idea that those people are disappointed, and they can’t properly enjoy their free time. For instance, when I was at university, I’ve been more active, and I’ve felt freshness when my class schedule was full. Moreover, working more than eight hours a day adversely affect human’s mental and physical health.
To sum up, this conclusion can be drawn that employees’ efficiency will increase when they work five days a week for shorter hours because Not only does it have positive influence on companies’ finance, but also three-day weekend can be adverse as working more than eight hours a day.
- young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of the society as a whole 90
- because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 90
- at universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support 76
- it is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours 90
- to improve the quality of education universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 599, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...im my opposition regarding operating in less days with extra hours. I Feel this way ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[2]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...mpany would be unprofitable in one day. Everyday, we are reading or hearing of prosperou...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... all year round. Thus, today he becomes a succeed producer in our industrial city since h...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s working more than eight hours a day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2344.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99786780384 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72803646098 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5516309146 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.368421053 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6842105263 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398729401741 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111574207625 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141341390328 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263766431224 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856059407661 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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