In today’s progressive and enlightened world where we are living, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of influences of decisions made in the present by governments on future of societies. The controversial question is whether youths can also affect future of societies or it is only determined by governments. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I’m inclined to affirm that young generation are impressive on their current and future situation of their societies. They’re actively take part in helping and caring their surrounding phenomena. I feel this way for some cogent reasons, which I will explore in following essay to empower my vantage point.
First and foremost, it is established beyond doubt that nowadays social media are increasingly used by nation to refute or support government decisions. Social networks such as Instagram, Facebook and twitter are ways to express the opposition of the citizens regarding a matter. People announce a date to protest in particular day and hour or make a deal to gather on the streets. For instance, were the inflation is increased in a country young generation would endeavor to set up campaigns on social media to balance the live expenses rather than endure it. One of my experiences in recent months has proved this matter. American people advocate Black lives on social media as a consequence of the murder of black man by the American police. The people reaction led to hold a lawsuit against the police officer.
The other equally important reason which I like to explain lies on the reality of volunteering jobs. Lately, youngsters are willing to serve as volunteers in social organizations like the Red Cross to have an even the slightest impact on their surrounding era. Not only are these people trying to find time to work as volunteers, but they accomplish their volunteer responsibilities with no benefits in return. they assume that activities such as caring for homeless, sick, or elderly are considered as their duties. Only when my father carried out a volunteer job did I realize how these types of activities can alter society future. Eight years ago, a massive earthquake which measured 6 on the Richter scale, happened in one of the Iranian cities named Bam. The earthquake entirely destroyed the city and left an immense number of homeless. My father as an engineer made a decision to voluntarily join the Red Cross organization to build up new constructions and structures. In mentioned year, numerous individuals assisted Bam citizens in their difficulties. As a result, today thanks to the volunteers and organizations Bam become a completely new and modern city.
To sum up, this conclusion can be drawn that youngsters have spectacular contribution in their future societies since they can express their support or opposition in many ways or have a vital role in making a better world in whole.
- because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 90
- it is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours 90
- at universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support 76
- young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of the society as a whole 90
- to improve the quality of education universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...role in making a better world in whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, for instance, i feel, in particular, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2494.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12114989733 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96816236325 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577002053388 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 795.6 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5065802202 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.434782609 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1739130435 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208751069019 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426872738505 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510477108406 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114448782152 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477456380211 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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