By and large, there might be a various range of thoughts and ideas on the statement. Some might prefer to keep the old friends, while others focus on new ones. Briefly pointing out, I personally think it is important to keep old friends rather than to make new ones. I support my opinion by holding three reasons discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, making new friends takes a lot of time, which causes individuals to lose it abundantly. As a rule, for people, including of any ages, it is a need to investigate about those who are going to be made their new friends. This is because the importance of the personalities of new persons in individuals lives, which affect them correspondingly to their type of traits. The point is that this a time-taking process. My own experience is a brief example here. A friend of mine wanted to begin a new friendship with one of his mates. To sum up, he focused about two months on his mate's personality, which ended up without a desirable consequence. Meanwhile, I could pass a complete English course, which was his ambition, too.
Secondly, Old friends are much closer to their friends, which can assist and also realize them better. Counter of the argument, new friends are not as much close as the old friends, so they cannot help, or comprehend each other as they should. For instance, I have four old close friends that they help me anytime, without even asking them to help. The fact is they feel free to take part in my problems, while a new friend does not have such air. Conclusively, I never ask somebody to help, as a I do not like it, and more importantly my old and close friends are there.
Another conspicuous reason is that close friends are better familiar with each other's characteristic, while new friends are not. Old friends know whenever to call, what to tell and how to treat each other. Due to the well-known background of each other they do it. As I mentioned above, those four friends of mine help me not only because they feel free to do it, but also this is because they are well-known with my habit that is mentioned already. Moreover, they know how to make me happy while I am sad. Therefore, there is no need for me to ask anybody for help.
In conclusion, I think it is vital to keep old friends rather to make new friends. I claim as this because of three reasons. Firstly, it takes lots of time to make new friends, also the fact that old friends are much closer to each other, and moreover, they know each other very well.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.” 70
- It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.” 73
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 56
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'I'?
Suggestion: a; I
...ively, I never ask somebody to help, as a I do not like it, and more importantly my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, by and large, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50834050335 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9245392339 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9615384615 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36690079882 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104932695986 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118049757948 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235014025296 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956924343166 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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