It is more important to work at job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy.
Learning are never end until people are live in the world. Learning are good quality of people who always learn same thing new. There is no matter where and when learn. Knowledge is one of the most important to survive in this era. Some people think that people can learn most important lessons in school because they mate a different people that why they learn so many thing, teach new things and also they learn a life lesson. However, in my point of view people learn most important things outside of school rather than inside of school.
To begin with, everyone can learn many things from society and community. People can learn from so many people who live in community. They learn how to communicate with other and how to behave with other people. In school they learn also communications skill but they implement in real life in front of society so they can expand a knowledge and also they gain knowledge with other. For example I was in school that time I communicate in front of my classmate and I never talk with other people. When I started too involved in community then I improve my communications skills and increase my knowledge.
Furthermore, only educations knowledge are not required. People need to aware of outside information’s so that people can learn other country’s culture and living style. People can read a newspaper so they can learn so many information. In school people can learn history of country they not aware of what’s going on today. For instance, my brother was in school he has knowledge about history of country. When he started reading newspaper then they know about real situations in the world.
To sum up, learn inside school is important but outside is very important because of learn in real life situations and people can learn more in society so I believe that knowledge is outside of school is more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ended'.
Suggestion: ended
Learning are never end until people are live in the world. Lea...
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Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... people are live in the world. Learning are good quality of people who always learn...
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Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...different people that why they learn so many thing, teach new things and also they learn a...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'educations'' or 'education's'?
Suggestion: educations'; education's
...ease my knowledge. Furthermore, only educations knowledge are not required. People need...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...n read a newspaper so they can learn so many information. In school people can learn...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...n read a newspaper so they can learn so many information. In school people can learn history of ...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...has knowledge about history of country. When he started reading newspaper then they ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but outside is very important because of learn in real life situations and people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6163939966 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427244582043 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9905346161 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3157894737 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0240796784103 0.236089414692 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00940409902998 0.076458572812 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204374351618 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251516609734 0.150856017488 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288554679282 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.