It s more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends,

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...irlfriend due to some small problems. I went to my friend for help, and I hope...
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...end due to some small problems. I went to my friend for help, and I hoped that...
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...ery meaningful. After I got a solution, I know how I should behave with my girl...
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...lution, I know how I should behave with my girlfriend. I was very thankful that ...
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... my girlfriend. I was very thankful that he was so helpful. However, I may not s...
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...end. I was very thankful that he was so helpful. However, I may not share my pro...
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... Secondly, old friends will help us in many conditions. Old friends always acc...
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...ondly, old friends will help us in many conditions. Old friends always accompany...
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... always accompany us in both bad or good situations, so they will be there for u...
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...y us in both bad or good situations, so they will be there for us. For instance...
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...at keeping old friends is more important than making new friends. This is because...
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...than making new friends. This is because old friends can be trusted and care ab...
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...ew friends. This is because old friends can be trusted and care about us more t...
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... is because old friends can be trusted and care about us more than new friends....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44908616188 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59081519039 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506527415144 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6929011863 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.1111111111 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1851851852 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.51851851852 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33065846774 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105305482439 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180222319264 0.0737576698707 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308467983458 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.225583361674 0.0645574589148 349% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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