It s more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends
There is no shortage debate whether it is better to keep old friends or make new friends. In my opinion, it is better to keep my old friends instead of making new friends. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, old friends are more trustworthy than new friends. We know each other our attitudes and behaviours so we are not shy around each other. Sometimes we have some ridiculous experiences with them and share our private problems because we know that they will not tell our shortcomings to other people. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in college, I often quarrelled with my girlfriend due to some small problems. I went to my friend for help, and I hoped that he could give me some solutions. I asked him how to treat her well and how to make her comfortable. He advised me very patiently, every single word was very meaningful. After I got a solution, I know how I should behave with my girlfriend. I was very thankful that he was so helpful. However, I may not share my problems with new friends, because we do not know each other very well.
Secondly, old friends will help us in many conditions. Old friends always accompany us in both bad or good situations, so they will be there for us. For instance, when I was in junior high school, I experienced an accident which leads me to the hospital. I was hit by a car that my leg was broken. I cried because I could not stand normally. Quickly, my friends brought me to the hospital in order to get a medical assistant. They worried about my condition because of I almost unconscious on the way to the hospital. As I said above, old friends are the people who we can trust. They waited for me in turns until I could walk normally. I really appreciated this and I still cannot forget their kindness. People who we are not close to, will not be so caring.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that keeping old friends is more important than making new friends. This is because old friends can be trusted and care about us more than new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42077922078 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58687998406 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498701298701 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3397308237 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.037037037 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2592592593 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.51851851852 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326641158851 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104301911462 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163237990416 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291015785273 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186421937888 0.0645574589148 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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